Introduction to the writer's choice

The final piece I chose was about a significant holiday, I had experienced. I wrote it, either the first day or second day of class. It was the first thing we ever wrote in English 97.This is the reason why I chose it. This shows how my writing was at the beginning of the class. I want to give you, the reader a real sense of how I wrote.Here is an example "It was a hard fought match between both sides,but are hometown Seahawks won."It was an ok sentence,but could use some work.If you want to be good at something you have to practice. Since writing this I felt I have grown as a writer.