Introduction to the descriptive writing piece

My second piece I chose was "The Burgh's Diamond in the Rough". This was my first Major Writing Assignment(MWA)for English 97. I am very proud of this piece. I thought I did a good job describing a place,I have passion for.An example from the piece that shows description is "When you take your seat the crisp river mist hits your face".I can picture everything I write and I hope you can too.My passion really came out in my writing.I want to give you the reader the opportunity to enjoy.