Introduction to the effective writing

I chose "Arizona's Majestic Land",because this piece of writing really shows my ability to write a story. You the reader have the ability to feel like you are there. I give you the reader some good sensory details of Arizona.An example showing "The skies that day were as dark as a black hole in space". This piece is a very good example of good sensory detail.Well read on readers,I hope you enjoy.